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Monday, August 12, 2019

Persuasive writing to Mr Norman

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Can you pelas get a gaming Room in Room 8 cause if we get a gaming Room. We can have fun and play lots and lots of cool and new games.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Robert, I really like your slideshow and I think that you had lots of information and that was really good I also liked how you added in were you wanted the gaming room and you added how you wanted food and why you needed it. Next time you could check that you aren't repeating the same information and you could check it makes sense also you could add examples.
    Yours sincerely,
    Greer

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