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Wednesday, November 27, 2019

T4W7 The best and Ultimate story web

During reading time our group read take me to your leader. This story is about when Tim didn't want gweep to take him to his weader. So gweep was shooting a laser beam.
After that we went off and did the story web. We had to put in the characters setting problem action and the outcome in the story web. I find it easy to complete.

Comment one thing that you can read in my story web?









2 comments:

  1. Hi Robert,
    I like how you put in lots of detail and described the feelings of the character.
    It reminds of the story web I have also done. In my story web I added that Gweep was an alien.
    Could you add more detail about the setting and make the boxes bigger so we can read the words more clearly?
    Keep going, you're doing really well!
    From Room 3

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  2. Hi Robert!
    I like that you put in all the caplet letters in the start of your sentence.
    it reminds me of my story web but I said what would you do if a alien was in your room
    can you make the box bigger so we can read it probably

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