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Monday, December 2, 2019

the sandy warm deep dark sea

Hi Bloggers This is Robert we are learning about writing and putting  Good Detail about our piece of writing. We are trieding to add a good catchy tittle.  
do you know what wow words are in my Writing?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Robert
    I like how you put in more d+l in your story.
    I leant you went to the becach.
    Can you put in full stop because you got to much work.
    Keep going
    From Francis

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