Hi Blogers it is me Robert Today I am doing writing Iam making a gingerbread man for market day. Next we our doing lots of gingerbread man so we can do our reward if we get money
can you comment on and see what can you find inside my writing?
I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, December 5, 2019
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Hey Robot,
ReplyDeleteI like that you did a ginger bread man because i like them.
I also made a ginger bread man.
How about making ps4 like PS4.
Did you eat one?
From: Sonny.
Hi Robert
ReplyDeleteI like that you made your gingerbread and didn't use any tool.
That reminds me that I did the same thing as you and my one was different.
You have nothing to fix up.
From Alex
Hi robert
ReplyDeleteI like how you made the gingerbread man
I leant you can make the ginger bread man
Can you put in more d+l
Keep going
From Francis