Robert T4W8 Gingerbread man

Hi Blogers it is me Robert Today I am doing writing Iam making a gingerbread man for market day. Next we our doing lots of gingerbread man so we can do our reward if we get money

can you comment on and see what can you find inside my writing?

Day two SLJ Activtiy 3

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Hi bloggers
it is me Robert we are doing the SLJ so I was trieding to be the best at playing chess
I was saying what things I am good at and what thing I am bad at.

Do you know what detail I put into my SLJ?

SLJ

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my best and high dark playground

Hi Bloggers
we a posting our writing to the blog. Cause we  are doing writing and put a detail about our pieace of writing. Next we had to put the things that we had to put in like putting a catchy Tittle and make sure to give people or kids a question

DO you know what detail and information I put into my writing? 

  

the sandy warm deep dark sea

Hi Bloggers This is Robert we are learning about writing and putting  Good Detail about our piece of writing. We are trieding to add a good catchy tittle.  

do you know what wow words are in my Writing?

T4W7 The best and Ultimate story web

During reading time our group read take me to your leader. This story is about when Tim didn't want gweep to take him to his weader. So gweep was shooting a laser beam.
After that we went off and did the story web. We had to put in the characters setting problem action and the outcome in the story web. I find it easy to complete.

Comment one thing that you can read in my story web?

T4W6 My snow ride up to the sanded mountain

This week , Miss Lee asked us to write a fabulous recount about our weekend. We had to add all the descriptive tools we learnt . For example , Verbs , metaphors ,nouns and alliteration. Nouns are naming words. Alliteration is least 3 words with the same letter sound at the front.

I chose to write about me and my cousin at the beach.

Can you know what tools I put in my writing?